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Re: proofreader

From: Brian Sammon
Subject: Re: proofreader
Date: Sun, 19 Oct 2003 17:12:30 -0400

> This is a patch by Eric for the documentation. As I'm not a native speaker, I 
> sometimes cannot determine which is better, mine or his. So can you comment 
> on any or all of his changes, if you speak English fluently?

Wow, there's a lot of changes there--almost too much for one sitting.
But, I made it through the whole thing, and here's my thoughts--
I'll separate the changes into two types:
  1) The changes that rewrote things to make them clearer.
  2) The changes that added content.

The first set were all good improvements, and I highly recommend you apply 
those changes.
As for the new content, I don't have much opinion on that, except to say that 
If I were to choose between making all the changes and making none, I'd vote 
for making all the changes.

P.S.  To relate this to the recent topic of mailing lists, maybe a grub-doc 
mailing list is a good idea.

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