Re: [DOCPATCH]Revamp of doc/ref/scheme-control.texi

[Kevin Ryde]

Stephen Compall <address@hidden> writes:
>
> I was planning on saving this until I could get all the way through
> the file, but it's getting a little unwieldy, so please have a look.
> ChangeLog at the bottom of this email.

It'll be easier to review if you post independent changes separately,
showing the new text.

>       * scheme-control.texi (while do): Continue converting to active
>       voice.

I wouldn't worry about that sort of thing, not unless it's really
unclear.

>       * scheme-control.texi (begin): Added note about begin's
>       uselessness.

Well, it's only sometimes not required.  If you want to add something,
then perhaps a typical use in an `if'.

>       Untabified.
>       Fixed result indication in call-with-values example.

Thanks, I applied these bits.