bug#47630: Improve guix manual installation docs

[zimoun]

Hi,

On Tue, 17 Aug 2021 at 23:28, zimoun <zimon.toutoune@gmail.com> wrote:
> On Thu, 15 Jul 2021 at 12:56, bo0od <bo0od@riseup.net> wrote:
>>> Could you propose a concrete wording solving
>>> the issues you see
>>
>> Not really because english is not my mother tongue so there going to be 
>> errors
>> in grammars, choosing of words..etc so better to be written by someone who 
>> has
>> better english than me.
>>
>> But for the commands to go on step by step i can give that with little text
>> and any webadmin can pick it up and arrange it accordingly.
>>
>> If guix documentation built on wikimedia it would be much easier because i 
>> can
>> register and upload my changes and can be reviewed and updated, But using
>> email for this is not the best way to achieve it but what to do..
>
> Maybe you could provide what you find missing and where in the manual,
> with little text.  It should be a good start for pointing what and how
> to improve.

I plan to close this report if there is no concrete patch attached.
Because personally I do not see what could be done.

All the best,
simon