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More bugs on first page of German lilypond website


From: Markus Olbrich
Subject: More bugs on first page of German lilypond website
Date: Wed, 29 Oct 2014 19:13:36 +0100
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Hi!

Today, I observed that the sentence has been corrected. Thank you very
much. I think it is important to give a good first impression on the
website.

However, I recognized that there are some more mistakes:

In the header:
Incorrect is:
"... Notensatz für Jedermann"
Correct is:
"... Notensatz für jedermann"
(Because it is not only for people who's name is "Jedermann" but for
everyone.

In the second sentence:
Incorrect is:
"mit computergesetzen Noten"
Correct is:
"mit computergesetzten Noten"

In the third sentence:
Incorrect is:
"GNU Projekts"
Correct is:
"GNU-Projekts"

Kind regards,
Markus

-------- Weitergeleitete Nachricht --------
Betreff:        Bug on first page of German lilypond website
Datum:  Sun, 20 Jul 2014 20:45:10 +0200
Von:    Markus Olbrich <address@hidden>
An:     address@hidden



Hi!

On the German version of the website there is a mistake in the first
sentence of the first page (http://www.lilypond.org/index.de.html):

Incorrect is:
"LilyPond ist ein Notensatzprogramm, dass es sich zum Ziel gemacht hat,
Notendruck von der bestmöglichen Qualität zu erstellen."

Correct is:
"LilyPond ist ein Notensatzprogramm, das es sich zum Ziel gemacht hat,
Notendruck von der bestmöglichen Qualität zu erstellen."

Stylistically even better would be:
"LilyPond ist ein Notensatzprogramm, das es sich zum Ziel gemacht hat,
Notendruck in bestmöglicher Qualität zu erstellen."

Kind regards,
Markus

-- 
Dr.-Ing. Markus Olbrich
Institute of Microelectronic Systems - EDA
Leibniz Universität Hannover - http://www.ims.uni-hannover.de
Phone: +49 511 762-19661 - Fax: +49 511 762-19694





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