Manual: Wordsmithing Changes to First Four Chapters

[Jeffrey Oldham]

2002-Jan-23  Jeffrey D. Oldham  <address@hidden>

        These changes move the manual toward delivery.  Unfinished
        sections remain in the DocBook source code but are not printed.
        The first two chapters were indexed.  Wordsmithing throughout the
        document (hopefully) improved the exposition.

        * arrays.xml: Wordsmithing.  Finish describing the Domain use
        section.
        * concepts.xml: Wordsmithing.
        * data-parallel.xml: Rewrite "naive".
        * glossary.xml: Add some indexing.
        (stride): Fix definition.
        (template): New definition.
        * introduction.xml: Index.  Wordsmith.
        * manual.xml: Add 'unfinished', 'temporary', and 'naive', and
        'naivecap' entities.  Change names of entities that used capital
        letters.  Write short description of container views.  Comment out
        unfinished sections.
        * template.xml: Index.  s/<</&openopen;/g.  Wordsmith.
        * tutorial.xml: Wordsmith.

Applied to      mainline.
Approved by     Bill Clinton.

Thanks,
Jeffrey D. Oldham
address@hidden

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