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commit 86896f28c43fdea495bbe61a29e45cc53ec86d46
Author: Martin Schanzenbach <schanzen@gnunet.org>
AuthorDate: Fri Dec 23 19:19:09 2022 +0900

    Language
---
 draft-schanzen-r5n.xml | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml b/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml
index 9c2dbf9..1a252cc 100644
--- a/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml
+++ b/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml
@@ -291,10 +291,11 @@
         <xref target="underlay"/>.
         The interface provided by this underlay is used across the 
specification of the
         R<sup>5</sup>N protocol.
-        It also serves as a set of requirements of possible transport 
mechanism that
-        can be used to implement R<sup>5</sup>N on.
-        That being said, common transport protocols such as TCP/IP or UDP/IP 
are
-        supported.
+        It also serves as a set of requirements of possible transport 
mechanisms that
+        can be used to implement R<sup>5</sup>N with.
+        That being said, common transport protocols such as TCP/IP or UDP/IP 
and their
+        interfaces are suitable R<sup>5N</sup> underlays used by existing
+        implementations.
       </t>
       <!-- consider moving some of this back into sec considerations -->
       <t>

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