[lsd0004] 03/03: Too specific wording for L2NSE; already defined. GANA apparently already created the entries.

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commit ada4dc07acf571ab5c0dabb69c3dbc3303ca5474
Author: Martin Schanzenbach <schanzen@gnunet.org>
AuthorDate: Sun Dec 25 13:22:00 2022 +0900

    Too specific wording for L2NSE; already defined. GANA apparently already 
created the entries.
---
 draft-schanzen-r5n.xml | 11 +++++------
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml b/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml
index f195c5f..5db7b9e 100644
--- a/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml
+++ b/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml
@@ -835,11 +835,10 @@ bchar = *(ALPHA / DIGIT)
            <t>
             This function computes the number of neighbors
            that a message should be forwarded to.  The arguments
-           are the desired replication level (<tt>REPL_LVL</tt>), the 
<tt>HOPCOUNT</tt> of the message so far, and
-           the base-2 logarithm of the current network
-           size estimate (<tt>L2NSE</tt>) as provided
-           by the underlay.  The result
-           is the non-negative number of next hops to
+           are the desired replication level (<tt>REPL_LVL</tt>), the 
<tt>HOPCOUNT</tt> of the message so far and
+           and the current network size estimate (<tt>L2NSE</tt>) as provided
+           by the underlay.
+            The result is the non-negative number of next hops to
            select.  The following figure gives the
            pseudocode for computing the number of neighbors
            the peer should attempt to forward the message to.
@@ -2552,7 +2551,7 @@ gnunet+tcp://12.3.4.5/
       <t>
         The registration policy for this sub-registry is "First Come First
         Served", as described in <xref target="RFC8126"/>.
-        GANA is requested to populate this registry as follows:
+        GANA created the registry as follows:
       </t>
       <figure anchor="figure_btypenums" title="The Block Type Registry.">
         <artwork name="" type="" align="left" alt=""><![CDATA[

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