02/04: website: outreachy-guix-git-log: Tweak wording.

[Ludovic Courtès]

civodul pushed a commit to branch master
in repository guix-artwork.

commit 6aabcbdc619c2f15718fe4c3c014fcabb35eabca
Author: Ludovic Courtès <ludo@gnu.org>
AuthorDate: Thu Apr 8 10:19:09 2021 +0200

    website: outreachy-guix-git-log: Tweak wording.
    
    * website/drafts/outreachy-guix-git-log.md: Tweak wording.
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 website/drafts/outreachy-guix-git-log.md | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/drafts/outreachy-guix-git-log.md 
b/website/drafts/outreachy-guix-git-log.md
index 5378e60..0c6a7c2 100644
--- a/website/drafts/outreachy-guix-git-log.md
+++ b/website/drafts/outreachy-guix-git-log.md
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ tags: Outreachy
 
 After three months of working on the implementation of the `guix git log`
 subcommand, as part of the [Outreachy](https://www.outreachy.org/) December
-cohort, here's a wrap-up of what's been accomplished so far.
+round, here's a wrap-up of what's been accomplished.
 
 #### Magali says
 
@@ -65,16 +65,16 @@ commit history from all Guix channels they have.
 #### Simon says
 
 It was my first experience mentoring for the Outreachy program and now I am
-glad to have done it.  I have learnt a lot on various topics.  I have already
-mentored time to time interns, though it was the first time full remote, not
-on the same timezone, and using code I am not expert.  Thanks to Gábor,
-Ludovic and Ricardo to push me to jump in this journey.
+glad I did it.  I have learnt a lot on various topics.  I had already
+mentored interns occasionally, though it was the first time fully remote, not
+on the same timezone, and with code on which I am not expert.  Thanks Gábor,
+Ludovic and Ricardo for pushing me to jump in this journey.
 
 Reading back the [initial
 proposal](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/guix-devel/2020-09/msg00108.html)
 coming from a 2019
 [question](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/help-guix/2019-06/msg00098.html),
-I am happy by the insofar Magali's internship.  It opens the road for
+I am happy by the insofar Magali's internship.  It paves the way for
 [future](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/guix-devel/2020-12/msg00141.html)
 
[proposals](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/guix-devel/2020-12/msg00170.html)
 or the implementation of other `guix git` subcommands.