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commit 0c54c6a56fd7c7316e8b644aa4116d53969a856d
Author: Ludovic Courtès <ludo@gnu.org>
AuthorDate: Tue Dec 14 14:37:44 2021 +0100

    website: the-big-change: Tweak.
    
    * website/drafts/the-big-change.md: Tweaks suggested by rekado and ngz.
---
 website/drafts/the-big-change.md | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/drafts/the-big-change.md b/website/drafts/the-big-change.md
index ca198ef..9cf7e00 100644
--- a/website/drafts/the-big-change.md
+++ b/website/drafts/the-big-change.md
@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@ with additional dependencies goes like this:
 The variant defined above adds two inputs to those of `hello`.  We
 introduced a macro, `modify-inputs`, which allows packagers to express
 that in a higher-level (and less cryptic) fashion, in a way that does
-not refer to input labels.  Using this other linguistic device (ah ha!),
+not refer to input labels.  Using this other linguistic device (ha ha!),
 the snippet above becomes:
 
 ```scheme
@@ -468,14 +468,14 @@ like this:
 -     `(("ansible" ,ansible)
 -       ("encfs" ,encfs)
 -       ("fuse" ,fuse)
--       ("util-linux" ,util-linux)  ;; for umount
+-       ("util-linux" ,util-linux)  ;for umount
 -       ("findutils" ,findutils)
 -       ("gnupg" ,gnupg)
 -       ("which" ,which)))
 +     (list ansible
 +           encfs
 +           fuse
-+           util-linux ;; for umount
++           util-linux ;for umount
 +           findutils
 +           gnupg
 +           which))