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[bug#36404] [PATCH 4/4] doc: Add section for 'guix deploy'.
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Jakob L. Kreuze |
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[bug#36404] [PATCH 4/4] doc: Add section for 'guix deploy'. |
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Tue, 02 Jul 2019 12:45:30 -0400 |
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Gnus/5.13 (Gnus v5.13) Emacs/26.2 (gnu/linux) |
Hi Kyle,
Kyle Meyer <address@hidden> writes:
> nitpick: Following the style used elsewhere in guix.texi, I think this
> "--" and the closing one below should be "---" with no surrounding
> spaces.
Yep, you're right. I cracked open the Texinfo manual and there indeed is
a difference in how the two are parsed: the former is treated as an en
dash while the latter is treated as an em dash. Thanks for pointing that
out!
> This last sentence doesn't quite parse for me. Perhaps
>
> A more complex deployment may involve, for example, starting virtual
> machines through a VPS provider. In such as case, a different
> @var{environment} type would be used.
>
> ?
That's much clearer wording. I think I might use that verbatim. Also, I
should probably be using two spaces to end my sentences as you did there
:)
> Repeated "only".
Nice catch!
> Also, as a meta nit: It'd be helpful if you'd mark updated patch
> series with the iteration count (e.g., v3). You can do this with
> git-format-patch's --reroll-count option.
Oh awesome, I'll be sure to start using that.
Thanks for the comments and the kind words,
Jakob
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- [bug#36404] [PATCH 0/3] Refactor out common behavior for system reconfiguration., (continued)
[bug#36404] [PATCH 0/4] Add 'guix deploy'., Jakob L. Kreuze, 2019/07/01
- [bug#36404] [PATCH 1/4] ssh: Add 'identity' keyword to 'open-ssh-session'., Jakob L. Kreuze, 2019/07/01
- [bug#36404] [PATCH 2/4] gnu: Add machine type for deployment specifications., Jakob L. Kreuze, 2019/07/01
- [bug#36404] [PATCH 3/4] Add 'guix deploy'., Jakob L. Kreuze, 2019/07/01
- [bug#36404] [PATCH 4/4] doc: Add section for 'guix deploy'., Jakob L. Kreuze, 2019/07/01
- [bug#36404] [PATCH 4/4] doc: Add section for 'guix deploy'., Kyle Meyer, 2019/07/02
- [bug#36404] [PATCH 4/4] doc: Add section for 'guix deploy'.,
Jakob L. Kreuze <=
- [bug#36404] [PATCH 4/4] doc: Add section for 'guix deploy'., Kyle Meyer, 2019/07/02
- [bug#36404] [PATCH v4 0/4] Add 'guix deploy'., Jakob L. Kreuze, 2019/07/02
- [bug#36404] [PATCH v4 1/4] ssh: Add 'identity' keyword to 'open-ssh-session'., Jakob L. Kreuze, 2019/07/02
- [bug#36404] [PATCH v4 2/4] gnu: Add machine type for deployment specifications., Jakob L. Kreuze, 2019/07/02
- [bug#36404] [PATCH v4 3/4] Add 'guix deploy'., Jakob L. Kreuze, 2019/07/02
- [bug#36404] [PATCH v4 4/4] doc: Add section for 'guix deploy'., Jakob L. Kreuze, 2019/07/02
- [bug#36404] [PATCH v4 4/4] doc: Add section for 'guix deploy'., Christopher Lemmer Webber, 2019/07/03
- [bug#36404] [PATCH v4 4/4] doc: Add section for 'guix deploy'., Ludovic Courtès, 2019/07/04
[bug#36404] [PATCH v4 4/4] doc: Add section for 'guix deploy'., Thompson, David, 2019/07/04
[bug#36404] [PATCH v4 4/4] doc: Add section for 'guix deploy'., Ludovic Courtès, 2019/07/05