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From: | Phil Holmes |
Subject: | Re: Web:Introduction: Rename "Our Goal" box (issue 48430043) |
Date: | Tue, 7 Jan 2014 10:55:01 -0000 |
To: <address@hidden> Cc: <address@hidden>; <address@hidden> Sent: Tuesday, January 07, 2014 10:45 AM Subject: Re: Web:Introduction: Rename "Our Goal" box (issue 48430043)
https://codereview.appspot.com/48430043/diff/1/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi File Documentation/web/introduction.itexi (right): https://codereview.appspot.com/48430043/diff/1/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode14 Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:14: @subheading Our Mission On 2014/01/07 10:17:47, PhilEHolmes wrote:I dislike this intensely. It smacks of corporate nonsense - read thetext thatlarge conglomerates have under "Our mission". Please leave it asgoal, orsomething similar and non-corporate.Too bad you didn't notice that in one of my earlier suggestions...
I did, but was not sure what you were proposing to change, as opposed to just making suggestions.
I don't like the "Goal" because it sounds too much like something unachieved. Any other suggestions?
"Our goal" :-) No less achieved than a mission.
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