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Re: Absolute Beginners
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David Rogers |
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Re: Absolute Beginners |
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Mon, 25 Dec 2006 19:09:56 -0800 |
Geoff Horton wrote:
>> You can analyze the exercise and see that the first note e appears a
>> third above middle c rather than a sixth below; the same happens with
>> the following g in relation to the preceding e; then comes a c a
>> fourth above the g instead of a fifth below, an so forth.
>
>"then comes a c a" is confusing. It looks at first glance as if both
>"a"s are pitches, not the English indefinite article. I can't come up
>with a good way to fix this at the moment...
Change it to "then comes the c that is a fourth above..."
It may be too long, but at least it's clear.
David
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