[Office-commits] r9977 - trunk/campaigns/windows7sins

[sysadmin]

Author: www-data
Date: Mon Oct  5 11:27:22 2009
New Revision: 9977

Log:
web commit by peterb

Modified:
   trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/letter-ngo.mdwn

Modified: trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/letter-ngo.mdwn
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--- trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/letter-ngo.mdwn        Mon Oct  5 11:11:39 
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+++ trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/letter-ngo.mdwn        Mon Oct  5 11:27:22 
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 enhance the relationship you have with your stakeholders and donors and secure 
the independence and freedom for your organization
 to achieve its mission.
 
-For many years, charities and not-for-profit organizations like yours
+For many years, charities and nonprofit organizations like yours
 have relied on Microsoft and the Windows operating system, and because
 they threaten to stop supporting older versions of Windows in the
 long-term, and because their system is proprietary (not free/libre), you
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 even when you don't need the new "features" and even when updating
 negatively affects your ability to operate.
 
-The dependency of organizations working for social change and improvement on 
software owned and exclusively controlled by Microsoft is leading society into 
an era of digital restrictions. Microsoft Windows was engineered from the 
ground up as a Digital Restrictions Management (DRM) and Treacherous Computing 
(TC) platform. Microsoft hides these defects under more benign-sounding names 
like "Digital Rights Management" and "Trusted Computing" -- the fact is that 
Windows is designed to limit what people can do with documents and digital 
media files.
+The dependency of organizations working for social change and improvement on 
software owned and exclusively controlled by Microsoft is leading society into 
an era of digital restrictions, threatening and limiting our freedoms. 
Microsoft Windows was engineered from the ground up as a Digital Restrictions 
Management (DRM) and Treacherous Computing (TC) platform. Microsoft hides these 
defects under more benign-sounding names like "Digital Rights Management" and 
"Trusted Computing" -- the fact is that Windows is designed to limit what 
people can do with documents and digital media files.
 
 As with Windows Vista, Windows 7 represents Microsoft's continued
 attacks against the security, privacy and freedom of your organization,