[Savannah-cvs] [681] proofread and update

[ineiev]

Revision: 681
          
http://svn.savannah.gnu.org/viewvc/?view=rev&root=administration&revision=681
Author:   ineiev
Date:     2023-12-06 11:18:11 -0500 (Wed, 06 Dec 2023)
Log Message:
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proofread and update

Modified Paths:
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    trunk/sviki/CvsAnonymous.mdwn

Modified: trunk/sviki/CvsAnonymous.mdwn
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--- trunk/sviki/CvsAnonymous.mdwn       2023-12-06 15:24:52 UTC (rev 680)
+++ trunk/sviki/CvsAnonymous.mdwn       2023-12-06 16:18:11 UTC (rev 681)
@@ -1,19 +1,17 @@
 We have been asked how to access CVS anonymously
 
-Each project has a CVS link pointing to such information, which you can
-find at the top of the project page, in the Public Areas links line.
+Each group using CVS has a link pointing to such information,
+which you can find at the top of the group page, in the Source Code menu.
 
 For example, check the top of
-<http://savannah.gnu.org/projects/emacs>
+<https://savannah.gnu.org/projects/emacs>
 
 The link points to
-<http://savannah.gnu.org/cvs/?group=emacs>
-which contains information on how to anonymously access the Emacs CVS
-repository.
+<https://savannah.gnu.org/cvs/?group=emacs>
+which contains information on how to access Emacs CVS repositories.
 
-Just replace 'emacs' in the URL by the project system name you're
-interested in, or just click on the "CVS" link in that project page to
-get appropriate information.
+Just replace 'emacs' in the URL with the system name of the group you are
+interested in, or visit the "CVS" link on that group page.
 
-To find a project page, just search for the project name using the
+To find a group page, you can search for the group name using the
 search box in the Savannah menu on your left.