Re: News item: LSM

[Wolfgang Jährling]

Alfred M. Szmidt <address@hidden> wrote:
> * Wolfgang Jährling writes:
> > Various developers of the Hurd and people interested in it will meet
> 
> Various Hurd developers and people interested in the development of
> the Hurd?

This sounds a bit long winded, and also alters the intended meaning.

> > the people from <A HREF="http://www.hurdfr.org/";>HurdFr</A> will
> > give an introduction to the Hurd, and another presentation about the
> > Hurd will be given by  Marcus Brinkmann.
> 
> "various people from HurdFR will keep talks about the Hurd, and a
> presentation about the Hurd will be kept by Marcus Brinkmann."

No, this is wrong, there will only be one talk by the HurdFr people. And
"to keep a talk" sounds strange to me.

Cheers,
GNU/Wolfgang

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