Re: Updating the Manual

[Jonathan Levi, M.D.]

At 12:21 AM +0100 12/24/03, Han-Wen Nienhuys wrote:
> address@hidden writes:
>  > Han-Wen, thank you for your letters. How do I go about updating the
>  > manual?...
> see https://savannah.gnu.org/cvs/?group=lilypond

I did, and I have the following corrections already:

1. In the section "Getting a Copy of the CVS Repository", subsection 
"CVS Newbies", the sentence

        The basic _informations_ described further on this page _are_
        _detailled_ in the savannah user doc.

should be

        The basic _information_ described further on this page _is_
        _detailed_ in the savannah user doc.

("Information" is a collective noun and is never written in plural 
form; this is a very common error by writers whose native language is 
not English.)

In the subsection "Symbolic Links in HTML CVS"

        Each line of the file _list_ a real file name

should read

        Each line of the file _lists_ a real file name...

I apologize for not using the CVS tree for these first corrections: 
as I wrote, I'm a newbie with respect to CVS, and will subsequently 
consult the teaching reference in your link.

Many thanks as before,

Jonathan
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