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branch master updated: website: Reduce use of 'advanced' term.


From: Ludovic Courtès
Subject: branch master updated: website: Reduce use of 'advanced' term.
Date: Wed, 04 Jan 2023 05:53:03 -0500

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civodul pushed a commit to branch master
in repository guix-artwork.

The following commit(s) were added to refs/heads/master by this push:
     new 91f92dc  website: Reduce use of 'advanced' term.
91f92dc is described below

commit 91f92dcf265666998f02066388b2919bd551c05a
Author: Simon Josefsson <simon@josefsson.org>
AuthorDate: Sat Nov 26 22:35:15 2022 +0100

    website: Reduce use of 'advanced' term.
    
    Signed-off-by: Ludovic Courtès <ludo@gnu.org>
---
 website/apps/base/templates/about.scm | 4 ++--
 website/apps/base/templates/home.scm  | 6 +++---
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/apps/base/templates/about.scm 
b/website/apps/base/templates/about.scm
index 9e2d252..1cf2f65 100644
--- a/website/apps/base/templates/about.scm
+++ b/website/apps/base/templates/about.scm
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
   (theme
    #:title (C_ "webpage title" '("About"))
    #:description
-   (G_ "Guix is an advanced distribution of the GNU operating system.
+   (G_ "Guix is a distribution of the GNU operating system.
     Guix is technology that respects the freedom of computer users.
     You are free to run the system for any purpose, study how it
     works, improve it, and share it with the whole world.")
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ system|GNU Hurd|GNU Guix package manager") #\|)
 
       ,(G_
         `(p
-          "Guix System is an advanced distribution of the "
+          "Guix System is a distribution of the "
           ,(G_ `(a (@ (href ,(gnu-url))) "GNU operating system"))
           ".  It uses the "
           ,(G_ `(a (@ (href ,(gnu-url "software/linux-libre"))) "Linux-libre"))
diff --git a/website/apps/base/templates/home.scm 
b/website/apps/base/templates/home.scm
index 7b72da8..8a0bccd 100644
--- a/website/apps/base/templates/home.scm
+++ b/website/apps/base/templates/home.scm
@@ -18,9 +18,9 @@
   "Return the Home page in SHTML using the data in CONTEXT."
   (theme
    #:title (C_ "webpage title"
-               '("GNU's advanced distro and transactional package manager"))
+               '("GNU Guix transactional package manager and distribution"))
    #:description
-   (G_ "Guix is an advanced distribution of the GNU operating system.
+   (G_ "Guix is a distribution of the GNU operating system.
    Guix is technology that respects the freedom of computer users.
    You are free to run the system for any purpose, study how it
    works, improve it, and share it with the whole world.")
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ management|Reproducibility") #\|)
        ,(G_
          `(li
            ,(G_ `(b "Liberating."))
-           " Guix is an advanced distribution of the "
+           " Guix is a distribution of the "
            ,(G_ (link-yellow
                  #:label "GNU operating system"
                  #:url (gnu-url "gnu/about-gnu.html")))



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