01/03: website: meet-guix-at-fosdem-2023: Fix typos and other issues.

[Ludovic Courtès]

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commit e6c6f8dff7646eb3cd24ccd05cafd8969e4bbecf
Author: Ludovic Courtès <ludo@gnu.org>
AuthorDate: Mon Jan 23 14:13:34 2023 +0100

    website: meet-guix-at-fosdem-2023: Fix typos and other issues.
    
    Reported by various people, thanks!
    
    * website/drafts/meet-guix-at-fosdem-2023.md: Fix typos.  Fix date of
    the Guix Days.  Clarify "remote".
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@@ -7,15 +7,17 @@ tags: FOSDEM, Guix Days, Talks, Community
 
 GNU Guix will be present at [FOSDEM](https://fosdem.org/2023/) next
 week, February 4th and 5th.  This is the first time since the pandemic
-that FOSDEM takes place again “in flesh” in Brussels, which is exciting
-to those of us lucky enough to get there!  Everything will be
+that FOSDEM takes place again “in the flesh” in Brussels, which is
+exciting to those of us lucky enough to get there!  Everything will be
 live-streamed and recorded thanks to the amazing FOSDEM crew, so
-everyone can enjoy wherever they are.
+everyone can enjoy wherever they are; some of the talks this year will
+be “remote” too: pre-recorded videos followed by live Q&A sessions with
+the speaker.
 
 Believe it or not, it’s the [9th year Guix is represented at
-FOSDEM](https://guix.gnu.org/en/blog/tags/fosdem/)!  There are several
-talks that will let you learn more about different areas of the joyful
-Hydra Guix has become.
+FOSDEM](https://guix.gnu.org/en/blog/tags/fosdem/), with more than 30
+talks given in past editions!  This year brings several talks that will let you
+learn more about different areas of the joyful Hydra Guix has become.
 
 This all starts on Saturday, in particular with the amazing [declarative
 and minimalistic computing
@@ -23,18 +25,19 @@ 
track](https://fosdem.org/2023/schedule/track/declarative_and_minimalistic_compu
 
   - [“_Bringing RISC-V to Guix's
     bootstrap_”](https://fosdem.org/2023/schedule/event/guixriscv/)
-    (video only), as a continuation of [last year’s
+    (remote), as a continuation of [last year’s
     talk](https://fosdem.org/2022/schedule/event/riscvadventures/), will
     be Ekaitz Zarraga’s account of the successful port the _full-source
     bootstrap_ to RISC-V—no less!
   - In [“_Using GNU Guix Containers with FHS (Filesystem Hierarchy
     Standard)
-    Support_”](https://fosdem.org/2023/schedule/event/guixfhs/) (video
-    only) will be present the recently-added [`guix shell --container
+    Support_”](https://fosdem.org/2023/schedule/event/guixfhs/) (remote)
+    John Kehayias will present the recently-added [`guix shell
+    --container
     
--emulate-fhs`](https://guix.gnu.org/en/blog/2023/the-filesystem-hierarchy-standard-comes-to-guix-containers/).
   - [“_Declaring just what is
     
necessary_”](https://fosdem.org/2023/schedule/event/minimalguixsystemimages/)
-    (video only) will show how to create system images that contain just
+    (remote) will show how to create system images that contain just
     what you need, by Efraim Flashner.
   - In [“_GNU Guix and Open Science, a
     crush?_”](https://fosdem.org/2023/schedule/event/guixopenscience/),
@@ -47,7 +50,7 @@ 
track](https://fosdem.org/2023/schedule/track/declarative_and_minimalistic_compu
     Replicant’s core developers, Denis “GNUtoo” Carikli.
   - [“_An Introduction to Guix
     Home_”](https://fosdem.org/2023/schedule/event/guixhome/) will be
-    given on Sunday (video only) by David Wilson of [System
+    given on Sunday (remote) by David Wilson of [System
     Crafters](https://systemcrafters.net/) fame—a must if you want to
     understand this newfangled Guix Home thing!
 
@@ -82,7 +85,7 @@ You can also discover Guix in other tracks:
 As was the case pre-pandemic, we are also organizing the Guix Days as a
 [FOSDEM fringe event](https://fosdem.org/2023/fringe/), a two-day Guix
 workshop where contributors and enthusiasts will meet.  The workshop
-takes place on **Thursday Feb. 1st and Friday Feb. 2nd** at the
+takes place on **Thursday Feb. 2nd and Friday Feb. 3rd** at the
 [Institute of Cultural Affairs (ICAB) in
 
Brussels](https://www.openstreetmap.org/?mlat=50.85025&mlon=4.37326#map=19/50.85025/4.37326).