bug#30207: 27.0.50; [PATCH] other-window-for-scrolling returns window on daemon frame

[Eli Zaretskii]

> From: "Basil L. Contovounesios" <contovob@tcd.ie>
> Date: Wed, 02 May 2018 19:57:59 +0100
> Cc: Noam Postavsky <npostavs@users.sourceforge.net>
> 
> +@kindex C-M-S-v
> +@findex scroll-other-window-down
>    The usual scrolling commands (@pxref{Display}) apply to the selected
> -window only, but there is one command to scroll the next window.
> +window only, but there are two commands to scroll the next window.
                    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I'd just say "there are commands".

>  @kbd{C-M-v} (@code{scroll-other-window}) scrolls the window that
> -@kbd{C-x o} would select.  It takes arguments, positive and negative,
> -like @kbd{C-v}.  (In the minibuffer, @kbd{C-M-v} scrolls the help
> -window associated with the minibuffer, if any, rather than the next
> -window in the standard cyclic order; @pxref{Minibuffer Edit}.)
> +@kbd{C-x o} would select upward.
                     ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
This makes the sentence ambiguous: it is not clear whether "upward"
goes with "scroll" or with "select".  Either say "scrolls upward" at
the beginning of the sentence, or maybe explain the "upward" part in a
separate sentence (and what does "upward" mean here anyway -- does the
text or the viewport move upward?).

Thanks.