Re: draft release announcement

[Han-Wen Nienhuys]

Juergen Reuter escreveu:
> "elegant input format" and "hard for other programs to parse" sounds 
> somewhat like a contradiction.  Maybe "sophisticated" instead of 
> "elegant" would be more appropriate?
>
> I am not sure about capitalization in English language, but shouldn't
>
> * all words in the headline except "than" start with a capital letter and

It depends. This is really a bad practice that was started in the time 
that newspaper were still set by hand. Then, there were not enough large 
type letters, so mixing caps spread out the usage better. The practice 
is silly today.

> * the itemized texts start with small letters (except "DocBook"), since
>   they continue an incomplete sentence?

yup.

> Shouldn't there be a full-stop dot after the last item?
>
> Greetings,
> Juergen


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