Re: draft release announcement

[Cameron Horsburgh]

On Tue, Oct 31, 2006 at 01:31:26AM +0100, Han-Wen Nienhuys wrote:
> 
> Hi guys,
> 
> a draft of the 2.10 release announcement is at
> 
>   http://lilypond.org/web/announce-v2.10.html
> 
> please comment.
> 
> thanks,
> 

A couple of things:

Is there going to be a 2.10.0? Even if there is, it's the new series that is 
making the news, so I would suggest leaving the version number at 2.10.

`got annoyed' is a little unprofessional. Perhaps `were disappointed' or 
`became disillusioned'.

`computer print-out' should be `computer print-outs' or even `computer 
generated print outs.'

`reading' should be `to read'

Of course, these are just my opinions! When does the announcement look likely?

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