Re: [PATCH]: Doc: LM 3.2: Entering voices in the correct order.

[Graham Percival]

On Sat, Sep 18, 2010 at 7:23 PM, Mark Polesky <address@hidden> wrote:
> This patch should prevent the type of confusion that
> leads to bug #45:
> http://code.google.com/p/lilypond/issues/detail?id=45

Hmm.

- I don't like the @example; could you use @enumerate instead?
- delete the "The following image demonstrates this visually"; just
end with "... and the even-numbered voices are given downstems."

... actually, do we really need the @example (or @enumerate) ?  The
image looks great.  What about removing the @example entirely?

- that said, one quibble: could the fingering for voices 5 and 6 be
placed below and above the notes?

- could you replace "... the third measure above could be entered..."
with "... above SHOULD be entered..." ?


- please avoid having @ref{A reference
split across a linebreak}
because it produces bad output in one of our doc formats (I forget
which one, though)

Cheers,
- Graham