Re: Doc: add a note about \relative f to notation (issue 1909) (issue 5096046)

[janek . lilypond]

I've made this briefer according to your suggestions.

beers,
Janek


http://codereview.appspot.com/5096046/diff/1/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely
File Documentation/notation/pitches.itely (right):

http://codereview.appspot.com/5096046/diff/1/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely#newcode258
Documentation/notation/pitches.itely:258: If you carefully consider all
the rules above and remember that the
On 2011/09/21 07:50:05, dak wrote:
> Probably a bit too contorted in the beginning.

> Just "One consequence of these rules is that" would be quite more
concise,
> decreasing the chances of the reader falling asleep before he gets to
the
> conclusion.

> Graham's warning against complex language was quite valid; the
"monosyllabic"
> version in the mail exchange a definite improvement.  The levity of
language
> makes it fit less well with a reference manual, though.  Cutting down
the
> starting sentence of the version quoted here seems still prudent.

Done.

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