Re: Some grammatical errors in http://www.fsf.org/software/hurd/hurd-talk.html

[James Morrison]

--- Bas Wijnen <address@hidden> wrote:
> I have just been reading http://www.fsf.org/software/hurd/hurd-talk.html. 
> It is a very interesting read, thank you for writing and publishing it.  I 
> found some spelling/grammar errors which I thought you would be interested 
> in:
> 
> Line 167-168:
> In 1998, I started the Debian GNU/Hurd project, and in 2001 the number
> of available CDs with Hurd packages fills three CD images.
> 
 
 That is awkward.  I think it extra words.  Marcus, should it say
"... and in 2001 the number of available GNU/Hurd packages fills three CD
images."

> Byem
> shevek
> 


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James Morrison
   University of Waterloo
   Computer Science - Digital Hardware
   2A co-op
http://hurd.dyndns.org

Anyone referring to this as 'Open Source' shall be eaten by a GNU

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