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Re: Some grammatical errors in http://www.fsf.org/software/hurd/hurd-tal
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Marcus Brinkmann |
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Re: Some grammatical errors in http://www.fsf.org/software/hurd/hurd-talk.html |
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Fri, 2 Aug 2002 18:06:15 +0200 |
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On Fri, Aug 02, 2002 at 08:52:26AM -0700, James Morrison wrote:
> --- Bas Wijnen <address@hidden> wrote:
> > I have just been reading http://www.fsf.org/software/hurd/hurd-talk.html.
> > It is a very interesting read, thank you for writing and publishing it. I
> > found some spelling/grammar errors which I thought you would be interested
> > in:
> >
> > Line 167-168:
> > In 1998, I started the Debian GNU/Hurd project, and in 2001 the number
> > of available CDs with Hurd packages fills three CD images.
> >
>
> That is awkward. I think it extra words. Marcus, should it say
> "... and in 2001 the number of available GNU/Hurd packages fills three CD
> images."
Thanks, guys, I have made the change.
Marcus
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