[Gnu-arch-users] Re: [GNU-arch-dev] Re: new documentation progress

[John A Meinel]

Anand Kumria wrote:
> On Sun, 27 Mar 2005 17:48:33 -0800, Tom Lord wrote:
>
>
> > I've been working up some new docs in "handbook" format.
> > It's not done yet but there's enough to get the sense:
> >
> >  http://www.seyza.com/src/docs-tla/my/id.html
> >
> > and
> >
> >  http://www.gnuarch.org/src/docs-tla/my/id.html
> >
> > I'm open to "early feedback" at this stage although
> > the development pace for these docs is very fast
> > so it won't be "early" for long :-)
>
>
> Some comments:
>
> 'Next' and 'Prev' would be nice within each section
>
> 1.1: 'revctl' - I wouldn't be shortening words straight off the bat
>
> - I'd suggest ~/arch/archives as the 'archloc'
>
> - likewise, ~/arch/mirrors as the 'mirrorloc'
>
> - and, ~/arch/revision-library as the 'revlib'
>
> 2.4: intro paragraph is hard to parse
>
> 4.1: the wiki syntax has broken the display
>
> 4.2: why not discuss 'tla grab' ?
>
> 5.1: mention '-l' ? since making your archive available for others is a
> common next step, typically done via plain HTTP
>
> 5.3+ and onwards aren't displayed in the left nav-area for some reason

I think this is because they don't exist yet. Try clicking on a link and
you'll find you get 404.

> Cheers,
> Anand

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