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Re: Male/female/other
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Juergen Reuter |
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Re: Male/female/other |
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Date: |
Mon, 13 Sep 2004 19:59:12 +0200 (CEST) |
On Sun, 12 Sep 2004, Graham Percival wrote:
> ...
> "Engraving was a highly specialized skill, a craftsman had
> to complete around five years of training before she could
> be a master engraver."
>
What about:
"Engraving was a highly specialized skill; a craftsman had
to complete around five years of training before earning
the title of a master engraver."
> "If the musician looks away once or has a lapse in her
> concentration, she will have lost her place on the page."
>
"If the musician looks away once or has a lapse in
concentration, a loss of place on the page is likely to
result."
Greetings,
Jürgen