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RE: Male/female/other
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Carl D. Sorensen |
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RE: Male/female/other |
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Wed, 15 Sep 2004 01:11:52 -0600 |
>
> "Engraving was a highly specialized skill, a craftsman had
> to complete around five years of training before she could
> be a master engraver."
"Engraving was a highly specialized skill; <note change in punctuation>
craftsmen
Had to complete about five years of training before they could become
master engravers."
>
> "If the musician looks away once or has a lapse in her
> concentration, she will have lost her place on the page."
"Musicians who look away one or have lapses in concentration will easily
lose their place on the page."
Carl Sorensen