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| From: | tdanielsmusic |
| Subject: | Re: Web: Download: Add introductory text (issue 40510046) |
| Date: | Thu, 12 Dec 2013 17:40:45 +0000 |
A couple of nitpicks, otherwise LGTM. https://codereview.appspot.com/40510046/diff/1/Documentation/web/download.itexi File Documentation/web/download.itexi (right): https://codereview.appspot.com/40510046/diff/1/Documentation/web/download.itexi#newcode57 Documentation/web/download.itexi:57: concept you'll find a list of known editors. For beginners it is "Beginners are recommended to ..." https://codereview.appspot.com/40510046/diff/1/Documentation/web/download.itexi#newcode63 Documentation/web/download.itexi:63: However, if you already have and editing environment and simply want "and" -> "an" https://codereview.appspot.com/40510046/diff/1/Documentation/web/download.itexi#newcode64 Documentation/web/download.itexi:64: to install a new LilyPond version you can proceed below. "proceed as described below." https://codereview.appspot.com/40510046/
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